#fridayfictioneers via rochelle – 2/1

January 31, 2013

Every Wednesday Rodin Wisoff-Fields posts a picture prompt challenging writers to create a 100-word story, poem, or whatever works for you.  After posting your work on your blog,  go back to her site and add your link on her Friday Fictioneers post.  Place.  Page.

I’m going to try to keep up with this, as should you.  Give it a shot.  I prefer to stick to 100 words, but she doesn’t mind either way.  Not everyone has the time to sit and write, revise, edit, revise, edit, etc. until getting it down to 100 and telling everything you want to tell.

I had some great editing challenges this week, and I’m kicking myself for not saving them for those who like to see the progression.

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The Sculptor

“Sorry.  Haven’t seen them since Tuesday,” The son says.

“Any idea when they’ll be back?” Detective asks.

“Nah.  They’re retired.  Always going places.”  Son washes hands thoroughly.

“Did they say where they’re going?”  Detective scribbles.

“Not usually.”  Son wipes hands on apron.

Detective leans closely.  “What’s this?”

“Soapstone.”  Detective scribbles more.

Son precisely arranges hammers, chisels.

“That’s them.  I’m sculpting my parents .”

“Nice.  So, you’ll call me if you hear from them?”

“Certainly.”

Detective leaves.  Son sits, a drastic grin, exhales.  Then, fist tight, he punches the table.

One chisel is gone.

Detective hurries to his car, pocket slightly heavier.

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100 words


#fridayfictioneers via rochelle – 1/18

January 17, 2013

Every Wednesday Rickety Wisoff-Fields posts a picture prompt to challenge writers to create a 100-word story or poem or anything that works for you.  After you post your work on your blog,  go back to her site and add a link to your post on her Friday Fictioneers post.  Place.  Page.

I’m going to try to keep up with this, as should you.  Give it a shot.  I prefer to stick to 100 words, but she doesn’t mind either way.  Not everyone has the time to sit and write, revise, edit, revise, edit, etc. until getting it down to 100 and telling everything you want to tell.

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Phone Call

“Hello?” said a raspy growl, putting down crayons.

“Afternoon, Sir.  I’m calling on behalf of-”

“Half of what?”

“Sir?”

“Half a sandwich?”

“No.  On beHALF.  I’m with the National Association-”

“Location?  In the living room.  Where are you?”

“No, Sir.  I’m calling on be-.  I’m calling for-.  (exhale)  We’re trying to raise money for-”

“Money?  Sure.  I’ll take some money.  Whatcha got?”

“No, Sir.  Would you like to donate-”

“I LOVE doughnuts!”

“Certainly, but children in town need-”

“Let ‘em get their own damn donuts!”

“No, Sir.  I’m-”

From the kitchen.  “Jimmy.  Who’s on the phone?”

*click*

“Wrong number, Mom.”

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100 words


#fridayfictioneers via rochelle – 12/28

December 27, 2012

Every Wednesday Renegade Wisoff-Fields posts a picture prompt to challenge writers to create a 100-word story or poem or anything that works for you.  After you post your work on your blog,  go back to her site and post a link to your blog entry on her Friday Fictioneers post.  Place.  Page.

I’m going to try to keep up with this, as should you.  Give it a shot.  I prefer to stick to 100 words, but she doesn’t mind either way.  Not everyone has the time to sit and write, revise, edit, revise, edit, etc. until getting it down to 100 and telling everything you want to tell.

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A Day’s Work

Gray jacket opens French doors, strolls balcony overlooking parade.  Cash-filled envelope in breast pocket.  Sunglasses hide darting eyes, scans crowd for Signal One – black fedora aside mailbox.  Signal Two – fedora scratches nose, crosses street.  Signal Three – gray jacket adjusts tie.  Fedora checks roof, pauses curbside, Signal Four – red bandana.  Behind sunglasses, gray jacket misses Signal Five – blue sneakers untied.  Parade noise covers single pop, envelope of cash fiercely penetrated, turns crimson, gray jacket crumples.

Hour later, black fedora, blue sneakers, red bandana having lunch.  Signal Six – tipped glass.  New waiter brings tainted lemonade.  Signal Seven – fedora checks watch…

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100 words


#fridayfictioneers 6/8 – via madison woods

June 7, 2012

Every Wednesday Madison Woods posts a picture prompt to challenge writers to create a 100-word story or poem or anything that works for you.  then post your work on your blog.  additionally, on friday, you go back to her site and post a link to your blog entry in the comments on her friday fictioneers post.

I’m going to try to keep up with this, as should you.  give it a shot.  i prefer to stick to 100 words, but she doesn’t mind either way.  not everyone has the time to sit and write, revise, edit, revise, edit, etc. until getting it down to 100 and telling everything you want to tell.

My story this week is all dialogue, so i used a hyphen to indicate one speaker just in case you need that to help distinguish the speakers because I didn’t want to waste words on “he said” and crap like that.  Here’s this week’s picture and my 100 words -

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“Umm.  That big bird?”

- “What bird?”

“I thought it was a bird.”

- “No.”

“The snow on that mountain?”

- “Nope.  Not the snow.”

“I got it.  Your hair.  Yeah.  Your hair.”

- “No, idiot.  Come on.  Be serious.”

“That airplane?”

- “The one you thought was a bird?  No.”

“The sun?”

- “Are you kidding me?”

“No, really.  It is not yellow.  I mean, if you look at it with the Hubble telescope it might look yellow.  But to our eyes it looks white.”

- “No.”

“I give up.”

- “The clouds.”

“Okay.  My turn.  I spy something – blue.”

- “I hate you.”

“Are we there yet?”

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100 words


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