- the writing process – step 4: proofreading/editing

March 6, 2012

Some call it proofreading, some call it editing, and I don’t really care which.  Step 4 is easy.  Punctuation?  Spelling?  Grammar?  All good?  Done.  MSWord and spell check are a great help, but things will slip by.  This step – for me – is almost unnecessary because I’m making an effort to proofread during the revising process.  This step exists more for students who are still learning the basics of the writing process.  It’s not needed as much for me.  It’s needed – just not as much.

Editing is not about word choices.  That was revising, or it should have been done when revising. 

     Editing is not:  Should i use walked into the room

                           or strolled into the room? 

     Editing is:  Should there be a comma before and or just and

                     Should I use a period or semicolon?

FYI: never use a semicolon unless you have no choice, but you’ll always have a choice.

Editing is also formatting.  Should I start a new paragraph here, or should I blend these two smaller paragraphs into one?  I hate trying to figure that out.  I’m just not certain sometimes.  Ask me if the comma or period is needed?  I’m your man.  Ask me if the question mark goes inside or outside the quotes?  Nobody is better.  However, breaking paragraphs sometimes confuses me.  The general rule is you break if there is a change in speaker, setting/location, or action.  Great, but it still confuses me occasionally.

There’s really nothing else to say, and I apologize if you’re now saying, “That’s it?  That’s all there is to say?  Thanks for wasting my time.”

You’re welcome.


- the writing process – step 2: writing

March 1, 2012

When I write a story, specifically fiction, I’m writing a movie.  I assign actors I think could play my characters.  A movie plays in my head.  The chosen actors play the parts.  I watch.  I type what I see.  That’s all I do.  If a scene doesn’t work, I essentially yell “Cut!” and delete/backspace and retype. 

Next to me is the outline from step 1.  As I finish typing each scene/chapter, and each event from the a, b, c, etc, I cross it off with a simple line and move on to the next scene.  That’s all I do.

When I’m writing, I’ve really have already written it when I was outlining.  That outline allows me to have already gone through the “movie” at least once.  So the actually writing, the step 2, is really the second time I’m writing it, so it’s more of a second draft than a first draft.  That’s all I do. 

That’s why I say writing a story is easy.  It’s the other parts that are difficult.

Tomorrow, step 3: revising.  I hate it.


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