Lying on your bed last night
Your feet tangled with mine
My knees tucked behind yours
Your back nestled against my chest
Close enough to feel your heartbeat
My arms holding you tight
Your hands in mine,
A kiss on your cheek
How could you possibly ask
if I was asleep?
19 thoughts on “last night”
🙂 you see, that’s why I love poetry… it’s a dream expressed in a few words…
my goal with poetry is this: to say as much as possible using as few words as possible – but saying it in a unique way that isn’t just a sentence. thanks.
exactly… it can be anything, just key words, a description, a scream…. for me Poetry and Feeling are synonyms… 🙂
I like this one best of all. Intimate and concise.
thank you sir. sometimes very curious as to how random people find random things that i post.
Ha, totally, I have no idea how those random people end up at my random posts either. This one’s pretty easy though: Literaryman liked something of mine; I liked something of theirs and then checked out the other likers.
good move. works for me too.
pretty hot poem:)
was a hot night 😉
btw: thanks. you were follower #200.
very glad to bring it to you.
you are so beautiful..wow
this is real poetry,this is how one should weave their thoughts,this is how words should flow
thank you so very much for such kind words.
L Ooooo V E L Y…
i hope she appreciate you.
no. she didn’t. haven’t seen her in a very long time. but thanks.
Where you asleep? 🙂