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Time – ch 10

 Took a few days off on the beach and didn’t have this finished as soon as I had wanted.  Now I have to hope I didn’t lose your attention.  I hope you’re still with me. John has landed in ’88 and only a few days from ’89.  Wouldn’t it be fun to do what he’s…

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Time – ch. 9

I struggled with the end of this chapter, but I don’t think it’s important.  You’ll see what I mean in the questions.  What’s curious to me is that the other chapters flowed out like water, but I wrote and re-wrote the last few hundred words of this chapter several times.  I’m not sure why, I think…

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Time – ch. 8

I have to set something up properly and apologize for an error, something I had forgotten in prior chapters.  When Darrow was asking those ten questions to John each time, there was supposed to be a metal box, about a one-foot cube, on the floor next to the chair.  Each time, after the last question,…

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Time – ch. 7

I know it’s repetitive, but I can’t help but express my thanks over and over again to those of you who are helping me out with this.  I try to convince myself that even though you are doing a lot of work, I might be providing you with some entertainment in return.  However, if the…

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Time – ch. 6

I know I already said I can’t keep up this pace, but that’s the help you get from a thorough outline.  As I told someone recently, an outline kind of allows the story to just flow right out.  You don’t get that when you make it up as you go along. There’s a complaint you…

Time – ch. 5

Moving right along, there’s a little more of an exchange needed between Darrow and John before they’re both ready to proceed.  I know that too much “mumbo jumbo” can be annoying, but there should be no more after this chapter.  And this chapter doesn’t have nearly as much as the previous chapter. Depending what kind…

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Time – ch. 4

Wow, things are rolling, and largely because of the help I’m getting.  And also because my kid is going to a Miley Cyrus concert, which allows me some extra time to keep writing.  I suppose it’s worth it, but I’m not really sure.  I mean, I would never buy her tickets for something like that,…

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Time – ch. 3

Welcome back, and thanks for coming back.  This and the next one were supposed to be one chapter, but I decided to break them into two chapters.  There’s a question at the end regarding that. I don’t have much else to say at this point except to let you get started.  It’s about 2,400 words,…

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Time – ch. 2

Please keep in mind that this is a first draft, and I have certain rules about first drafts.  One is that it’s more important to get the thoughts down on “paper” than it is to get all punctuation and spelling correct.  There will be mistakes, and I will be grateful if you catch them.  Please…