ocean yacht

Time – ch 21

Very sorry for how long it has taken for the recent chapters.  I’ve been spending a little extra time with my kid, and that means less time for writing.  It’s a good reason to not write, right?  Of course. This is the longest chapter yet, slightly over 3,300 words.  Three questions at the end, but they’re…

san diego seaport village

Time – ch 20

This chapter gets a little strange, depending on your point of view.  The end has some strong anticipation and, of course, ends with a beginning.  What’s interesting to me is that the second half of this chapter was in my outline pretty much exactly as it appears.  The first half did not exist at all. …

las vegas hotel

Time – ch 19

I hope I’m keeping up a better pace.  I also hope I’m keeping up a better story.  I recognize that it’s becoming more of a suspense story and less of a time travel story, but more about that in the questions.  Remember that good stories are “people” stories. Thanks for putting up with me.  Two…

boy on beach

Time – ch 18

Howdy.  Happy Sunday.  Football Sunday.  I know you’re busy watching the NFL, as I am too, but here’s the next chapter if you’re into it.  It was necessary to give something from John’s background, something to explain a little about his upbringing, or lack of upbringing.  I hope it eases some of the unhappiness about…

confession church

Time – ch 17

A few people have asked or mentioned John’s feelings regarding his girlfriend/future ex-wife.  This addresses that a little, and hopefully enough. Happy Friday!     Time ch 17 John, Sorry I had to hang up the phone.  I live with my grandfather, and he was coming into the room so I had to hang up. …

san diego seaport village

Time – ch 16

Hi.  Me again.  It seems only about three people are reading, but even just one is as important as twenty one, when it’s the right one who has the right comments and catches the right mistakes, and I don’t mean proofreading. Only two questions.  That sucks, I know, but it’s late and I need to get…

san diego seaport village

Time – ch 15

This chapter likely has places and procedures that are not exactly correct in terms of the city of San Diego.  I prefer to get things right, but I can’t do that right now.  So if anyone happens to know a great deal about the lovely city by the – by the whatever a Diego is…

Time – ch. 14

You might not know this, but I feel like crap for slowing down so much.  Let me explain.  My job is writing – I mean my day job.  I write websites for a web company.  I write website copy for jewelry stores, landscapers, churches, anyone who wants a website.  I was working a nightshift until…

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Time – ch. 13

Hey, sorry I have slowed down, but I recently changed workshifts.  I had been working nights, which gave me lots of time to write during the day.  Now I’m working during the day, and at night I have to now actually pay attention to other people.  I know, right?  Really gets in the way of…